tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6716423390943850279.post4286940995965066221..comments2023-06-25T18:10:53.081+05:30Comments on NOUVEAUTE...: Soulful RustlesSashu...http://www.blogger.com/profile/06671059585413076187noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6716423390943850279.post-70075146762871352792008-10-19T08:28:00.000+05:302008-10-19T08:28:00.000+05:30@trinaththanks a bunch for ur lovely words! made m...@trinath<BR/>thanks a bunch for ur lovely words! made mah day :)Sashu...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06671059585413076187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6716423390943850279.post-37744437848880590932008-10-18T22:24:00.000+05:302008-10-18T22:24:00.000+05:30There are two phases to this poem. The one in whic...There are two phases to this poem. The one in which you tell how you don't love some one and the one in which you tell how you love as. I think the first and second stanza set the mood and from the third stanza it is awesome. You could have as well written the poem from the third stanza. This would make it short, condensed, flowing and powerful. From the third stanza it is simply amazing!Trinath Gaduparthihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06365277684373227102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6716423390943850279.post-74502977693092857262008-10-18T19:12:00.000+05:302008-10-18T19:12:00.000+05:30thank youuuuuuuuuu! its something i finally did li...thank youuuuuuuuuu! its something i finally did like, of recent writes!! :)Sashu...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06671059585413076187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6716423390943850279.post-54727322676560138582008-10-18T18:33:00.000+05:302008-10-18T18:33:00.000+05:30There would be no other way to be or love so uninh...There would be no other way to be or love so uninhibitedly...!!!<BR/><BR/>I simply love this stanza:<BR/><BR/>Without any layers of guise, that could one day<BR/>Be peeled off from me.<BR/>Without any pride or intricacies.<BR/>I love you as if you were me.<BR/>As though your hands felt like mine,<BR/>And your smile lit up, not your face, but mine.<BR/>And as you close your eyes,<BR/>It's always me, slipping<BR/>Into your sleep.<BR/><BR/><BR/>And of course, the close.. the awesome close!Usha Pisharodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08569968324374522544noreply@blogger.com