Saturday 27 September 2008

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The stream does gyrate green flames-
I announced,
The decibels
Loud and clear.

The eyebrows raised itself,
And the lines of fate
Crowded
Into a frown
Pronounced.
Irked,
At the lack of trust
And faith
In my words,
I made a face
Of utmost grimace.

I wondered in disgust-
Why wouldn't you see the stream
In my hue?
The crystal clear water
That gushes in
And out,
Draped over moss hugging pebbles
And a carpet of green slippery mush,
That gleams in a lustrous brilliance
And cuddles into the water bed,
When tickled by the sun drops.
O' Why don't you but see
The flames of green,
In an enticing dance
As the rays of light touches it soft?

Exasperated,
I heave a sigh-
And, I find the eyes dance
Once more,
Throwing a beam of radiance
At me.

Well who cares for the green flames,
After all?

We quip, in unison,
Washed over
By a tide of sheer Feeling.

1 comment:

  1. The crystal clear water
    That gushes in
    And out,
    Draped over moss hugging pebbles
    And a carpet of green slippery mush,
    That gleams in a lustrous brilliance
    And cuddles into the water bed,

    This is one of the most delightful pieces of description I have ever read, and enjoyed! Loved the whole poem, but this is so lovveeeelyyyyyy!!!!!

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