The lapse
Felt trivial, then.
Now,
The gaping hole has opened up,
Wide and stark-
Sucking in, a vortex.
The razor-like
Indurations
Have started to hurt
And the pus,
oozes out.
A worm crawls,
Dancing patterns within,
Tickling me to oblivion-
And I know,
Soon, it would begin to hurt
And gnaw in deeper
Under the skin-
I'd ache
And hurt,
Bleed, and
Finally-
Die.
Inevitable.
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ReplyDeletei think this is an epitome of pain,
really well written
give a kick :)
Depressing! When I said that you would write, for sure, little did I imagine this would be unleashed!!
ReplyDeleteReal darky darky... and too sombre, with a hint of the obsessive, somehow..! But even with these, you're good! Inevitable, definitely... you and your quill's expressions!
wow...that was such a strong post...really had that punch to it...i was expecting a totally different thing when i read the title "Inevitable"...you stumped me...good one...cheers!
ReplyDelete@ shalu
ReplyDeletethanks a bunch! glad to know it had de kick :)
@ usha mema
ReplyDeletelol yea..even i din expect de write to turn out like this!! hehe...de words juz poured out...n ended up like this...so dark n depressin! sigh!
nywz thanks for the read! n thankz for all de encouragement! :)
@ sandeep
ReplyDeletethank you so much for ur read!! glad to know that u find diz one to be good enuff :)
There is always some pleasure to pain. Sometimes bleeding rilieves the pain. Your poem exactly does that.
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@ abhijit
ReplyDeleteglad to find you drop in here.. reeli appreciate it :) thanks!
Very different and I second Usha ma'am completely.
ReplyDeleteThe picture needs a special mention. very good.
@ soumya
ReplyDeletethank youuuuuu so very much! :)