Saturday 14 February 2009

Feeling so cold today...

The withered carnations
Break away, from my nimble fingers
Spiraling along with the wind.
I kiss my soul into it,
Breathing in the scent of loss.
And I wave a goodbye,
As the petals rise from the earth,
Carrying with it, moist tears
And silent prayers-

In hope,
That it would find you;
In faith,
That you'd read into it,
And find me.
And know it true,
How so very hard it feels today
Being away.
And realize,
How cold I feel today.

So, I send across to you
My soulful notes-
Just to say
I miss you so.
And amidst this lowly hue
I'm still glad
That I feel this way
Cold, and vulnerable.
For, without you,
I'd never have been this way
Loved, and missed.
(Just the way, you are.)

6 comments:

  1. Oooooh! Sashu, you write a dream here :) So true, so beautifully you, and your pea :)

    "I'm still glad
    That I feel this way
    Cold, and vulnerable.
    For, without you,
    I'd never have been this way
    Loved, and missed.
    (Just the way, you are.) "

    Ummm and Ummmmmmmm :)

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  2. And please remove the word verification thingy :D!

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  3. wow this was written beautifully =D

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  4. @ usha mema (ash has asked me to call ya somethin else thou..hehe..not callin that in here thou..lol..nxt tym! :D)

    thanks so much for your lovely words!! glad!!thank you! :)

    n yea, will remove de word verification thingy!! hehe!

    @ Sneha!
    thanks a bunch! n glad to c ya here :) do keep visiting!!

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  5. ahhh sadness yes.. but filled with love.. makes it all bearable.. such is love.. pain is pleasure!

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  6. @winnie
    rightly said, indeed! thank you :)

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