Thursday 3 July 2008

Transit

The voice cracks-
Traversing
Across the oceans,
Beyond the seamless space
To reach this point-
Up to me.

Hellooo!

The voice calls out-
Heart hammering, I sit upright,
Hanging on,
To each word-
Hopeful.

Oh...hi...!

Choked, a sigh escapes
My quivering lips.
And I hang on,
To catch that feel,
The sense-
Of sheer belonging.

Despite the transmission delay,
And the lack of clarity,
I wait,
Savouring the silence,
Knowing-
Feeling-
That heart's beat.

And,
As the connection breaks-
I sit back,
Nurturing the lump in my throat,
To satiation.

And a smile blossoms,
In the ashen silence
Of feeling.

8 comments:

  1. Thats sooo sweet, simple yet beautiful ! :)

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  2. Filled with feeling!!!!!!!!!

    Utterly so, this heart in the mouth, delicious feeling of belonging, and the slight sadness in the deep deep joy and relief too:)

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  3. There,do I see some happy tears? :)

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  4. Aww...Lovely..beautifully put..:)
    Could actually meet with it..hehe..yeah..Nostalgic Swiss breeze..

    [On a lighter note..(If it was infact true) I would just advice you to change the mobile service provide..:P]

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  5. Filled with feelings.

    copy that.

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  6. Aww...The lump in the throat and nurturing it,feeling loved!!! So Sweet:):)

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  7. wowie!

    reminds me of the song... mere piya gye rangoon :d

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  8. Sometimes you just give life up on despair note but then something cracks up and let hope sink in and fill you.

    I am left with such a feeling :) Feeling of belonging :)

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