The fireworks erupted,
From nowhere.
Brilliant flashes,
Of pompous colours-
Myriad emotions,
In one go-
Rapture!
The gentle entwining,
Of passion-
The touch,
That sent shivers
Across the spine,
The lips that hungered,
For that,
And this-
Breathless,
The dizzy magic bloomed.
Cease fire-
The senses called for-
Reluctantly,
And they let go-
Hunger in their eyes,
Shying away,
As the smiles blossomed,
Finally.
From nowhere.
Brilliant flashes,
Of pompous colours-
Myriad emotions,
In one go-
Rapture!
The gentle entwining,
Of passion-
The touch,
That sent shivers
Across the spine,
The lips that hungered,
For that,
And this-
Breathless,
The dizzy magic bloomed.
Cease fire-
The senses called for-
Reluctantly,
And they let go-
Hunger in their eyes,
Shying away,
As the smiles blossomed,
Finally.
That said everything.
ReplyDeleteWonderful.You use very very few words.It cares the reader a lot .Space is the most important commodity,the most important element to be tamed in creativity .You know it pretty well.
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keep on writing.
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