Thursday 22 February 2007

Unsaid wishes..

sometimes i wonder
where did you go..
for, all i know is
you were in my dreams

days have begone
hopes are still aflame
all i look upto
is a glance of yours

i haven't seen your smile ever
i haven't known your touch
i haven't been with you
but i have known none like u

they say am cracking up maybe
gone out of my minds
for,i dream of you day and night
of you..whom i have never known

i could feel you in me
filling me with a love so pure
i knew you were gonna come to me
from some faraway land..i knew

but i have been waiting for long
and still i haven't been blessed
for i am still barren to the core
for my soul calls upon you..so..

2 comments:

  1. Let me be the first to comment:)

    Firstly, congrats on your new blog.

    Gr8 attempt.

    Keep it rollin;)

    One suggestion: need to pay a lil attention to details;)

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  2. first of all the pic which u have selected for ur poem is apt....

    ur poem is full of emotions and makes reader imagine the fact...

    the words used are precise and apt.....

    Way to go my dear poetess frnd...

    looking for some more good poems from u....

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