Thursday 13 March 2008

Missing you...

Wordlessly,
In my silence,
It gnaws.

Thriving,
In the parch lands,
Of my soul,
It strays-

The very feel,
Of-

Missing,

Y

o

u.




My vacant eyes-
They stare on,
A flicker of hope,
Surviving.

Looking out,
Through the windows,
My heart hums,
A melancholy note.

Oh, don't you think,
Its been, a tad too long?
This absence,
It kills.

I wish,
I could let you know,
There's nothing more,
I could wish for.

All I long for,
Is-

Y

o

u
.



Oh, how I miss you!

Come home-
Soon.

I really miss you,
I swear-

I do.

5 comments:

  1. Ohh very mortal and that is what is the best in this poem...The longing is very nicely expressed!!

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  2. liked the style.

    good one

    Jus my perception, nothing fresh in the poem.


    keep it rollin;)

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  3. i found it cute :)

    loved the pic :)

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  4. Love the note of yearning, that you so specialize in:)

    neat structuring too...

    Umm and Ummmmmm nd Ummmmmmmmmmmmm ...Very very nice!!!

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  5. Now after reading this I miss my bro!

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