Thursday 6 March 2008

Worded.

Rapture!

Endless laughter,
Cradled in the warmth,
Of the all knowing glances-

Of theirs.

Contempt!

It breeds,
A veronica of the gardens,
Weeding venom in the minds-

Of ours.

Ecstasy!

Radiance prevails,
Amidst the torturous strings,
Winding and unwinding, it stays-

Ever classically, mine.

Treachery!

The stabs of hurt,
And the doer of it, both,
They survive together, for good or bad-

They do, but, never me.

Ephemeral!

The feelings and emotions,
The doings and undoings!
Insanity strikes after a sane thought, does it not?

Ah! Unfathomable- life, theirs and mine!

4 comments:

  1. Awesome structure..wonderful treatment..loved ecstacy..i m in all praise for this one

    Poetry!

    Nurturing emotions
    Tender cycles of love and words--
    As it touches the deepest chord.

    Reverberation---Ah,poetry.

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  2. well structured Sashu..

    Winding and unwinding, it stays-

    Ever classically, mine.

    Ephemeral!

    The feelings and emotions,
    The doings and undoings!
    Insanity strikes after a sane thought, does it not?

    Ah! Unfathomable- life, theirs and mine!

    Enjoyed these lines.

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  3. Ephemeral!

    The feelings and emotions,
    The doings and undoings!
    Insanity strikes after a sane thought, does it not?

    Ah! Unfathomable- life, theirs and mine!

    These lines just hit you!! I know, I really know this part:)
    I loved the structuring and the way you delved and brought out your own pearls of wisdom from each of those words! Great going!!

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  4. Perfect!

    The Locution,
    Super weaved emotions,
    Truly Invesed Commotions..!

    Forever Beautiful..Ever Brilliant..!!

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